General Comments

[SebastianR]

I think some of us aren't seeing the forest for the trees here.

Imagine the streets have a lot more buildings, and describe it accordingly. The actaul buildings (that can be entered) are just highlights amongst the full street. Places of particular import, or character that makes them stand out and be noticed.

Same for content within buildings. Most rooms are better furnished than a single shelf on a wall, one chair and a chest in the corner; those three items just catch the eye.

Odds are in a busy city there would be more than 12 houses or buildings on any given street.

*whew*

That comes off less friendly than intended.

Just noticing a trend in some descriptions. Certainly the short one line variety.

Cheers,
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Sebastian

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[admin]

thats the goal, just need mods to al be on the same page when writing content - even i need some help at tmes
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Thanks
Rob

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